For the dialogue of the first trailer I would like to keep it simple with a couple soundbites with the main characters displaying who they are and what their importance is to the story.
Jonathan- (Stops their playing) No guys come on. We practiced this all week. You have to know it by now.
Chris- Bro, calm down. We got it down. We just um need more practice that's all.
Jonathan- I am calm! (Storms off)
(VO) Randy: Listen I came up with the perfect plan. We should start playing at venues.
Will- Oh wait that's a great plan.
Chris- OK then we need to come up with a name before we ask Jonathan.
Will- Why not Jonny and the rockets? Sorry I'm hungry.
Randy- That's not bad.
NEXT PART
(VO) Jonathan- I guess venues wouldn't be too bad of an idea.
Chris- Let's do it!
Instead of developing this scene as much as I am in the first trailer, in the second I would like to not exactly rush through, but move past the beginning a little quicker and leave more time for the funnier scene. It would begin with them playing and in a voiceover:
Jonathan- We are the worst band that I think has ever existed. There's no way this band can be successful. (End of VO)
Will- Well Milli Vanilli won a Grammy, but then it was taken away.
Randy- Who the fuck is Milli Vanilli?
(VO) Randy- Trust me this is going to work out. We have the charisma and the passion, we just need the look too.
Will- How's this?
Chris- Nope
Jonathan- Absolutely not.
This is just the dialogue I plan to include in the opening sequences of the trailers. The rest of the script is still in development and there should be more teases releasing sooner rather than later.