Sunday, March 3, 2024

Dialogue

For the dialogue of the first trailer I would like to keep it simple with a couple soundbites with the main characters displaying who they are and what their importance is to the story.

Jonathan- (Stops their playing) No guys come on. We practiced this all week. You have to know it by now.

Chris- Bro, calm down. We got it down. We just um need more practice that's all.

Jonathan- I am calm! (Storms off)

(VO) Randy: Listen I came up with the perfect plan. We should start playing at venues.

Will- Oh wait that's a great plan. 

Chris- OK then we need to come up with a name before we ask Jonathan. 

Will- Why not Jonny and the rockets? Sorry I'm hungry.

Randy- That's not bad.

NEXT PART

(VO) Jonathan- I guess venues wouldn't be too bad of an idea. 

Chris- Let's do it!

Instead of developing this scene as much as I am in the first trailer, in the second I would like to not exactly rush through, but move past the beginning a little quicker and leave more time for the funnier scene. It would begin with them playing and in a voiceover:

Jonathan- We are the worst band that I think has ever existed. There's no way this band can be successful. (End of VO)

Will- Well Milli Vanilli won a Grammy, but then it was taken away.

Randy- Who the fuck is Milli Vanilli?

(VO) Randy- Trust me this is going to work out. We have the charisma and the passion, we just need the look too. 

Will- How's this? 

Chris- Nope

Jonathan- Absolutely not.


This is just the dialogue I plan to include in the opening sequences of the trailers. The rest of the script is still in development and there should be more teases releasing sooner rather than later.

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